When I got my feedback I was told that some of my analysis were a bit vague and that I needed to go back to it in order to make it more specific. I also had some work missing that I had to add to my research and planning. So since last Tuesday I changed some bits of my work:
* I went back to the `Representation to our trailer` and I made the analysis more specific by talking more about representation rather than target audience. I also added more information on how we as a group are going to represent our social group in our trailer.
* I then went back to my Oculus trailer analysis to add some more information. The first thing that I did was to watch the trailer again and I then noticed that I had missed some good examples of editing. mise-en-scene and camera shots.
* I also went back to my poster analysis and added more information on how the colours, layout, composition produces a good front cover website and how these affect the audience view on seeing the movie.
* I then added the storyboard and the shooting schedule on there to make my research and planning complete.
The final thing that I then did just in case was to go back to all of my analysis and read them all to check any mistakes or sentences that might not make sense.
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